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Capsule corparation:The best and brightest.
Topic Started: Feb 18 2011, 02:08 PM (1,645 Views)
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A lavender haired man was sat in a chair in an office scribbling on a small paper sheet,he folded it into the shape of a crane and opened his window,letting it blow away in the harsh winds.

Chapter 1:New arrival.

The lavender haired man closed and locked his door,he was wearing a hip-length blue jacket and dark black martial arts bottoms and a shortsleeved black top,an orange and silver belt keeping the two linked.
He headed down the hallway looking at his feet as many humans wandered around the many dark blue carpeted halls and would say how nice he looked that day and that they enjoyed working under him,he just ignored most as he knew it was just a desperate attempt to keep a job he wouldnt take away anyway.
He proceeded toward a large silver door,he placed his hand on a green glowing pad and the door slid open,he proceeded down the stairs.

He stepped into a large lab with a small 6 people in it,including the lavander haired man.He headed to the very end of the room to stand next to a tall man with brown hair and blue eyes,who was fiddling with a mechanical object that seemed to play music with him hitting certain squares on it.He got carried away and began playing a rather catchy tune which made a man who was dancing in a glass square dance even more,and actually enjoy it.
The man in a blue jacket tapped this sceintist on the shoulder and he turned around and looked shocked,then pushed the cube behind him.
"Good afternoon sir!"Said the man quickly.
"We are technically equal Haine,You dont need to call me sir."Replied the lavender haired man.Haine just sighed with relief.
"Okay,Trunks."Said Haine happily.
Trunks smiled and walked toward the dancing man,behind him the cube sprouted legs and transformed into a human shape.
"Chromy! hahah!"Haine said chuckling.
"Chromy" smiled and began making the tune again,but this time the blue flashing lights came from his chest,instead of the many smaller cubes as part of his cubed form.He was a taller blue haired man with slightly pale skin and wearing a black version of Haines labcoat.

Trunks stopped infront of the glass cube to see a black haired man with a blue sleevless jumpsuit and wearing white gloves and shoes,the man who was dancing.
"Trunks let me out of this goddamn box!"He said being unable to stop.
"Sorry dad but Your the only person that offered to test if drugs can make people better at dancing!"Replied Trunks hastily
His father,Vegeta,just glared."I only did it for the pot!"
Trunks rolled his eyes and walked away as Vegeta did a handstand backflip.He passed a blonde man who stopped him,this man was also in a labcoat."Trunks,I think we have a breakthrough with human and saiyan cells combined!"He said hastily.
Trunks' eyes bulged and he replied slowly "Really? Goguto..Thats great!"He said gleefully as he looked into a small eye socket where he stared into a green peice of bacteria.A yellow cell attached to a sky blue cell,a saiyan cell latched to a human cell,it resulted in a pale purple cell that seemed to radiate with a blue aura.Trunks just smiled and held his head in happiness and sat down.

Outside of the dome shaped building hosting the large font of blue and gold letters stating the name "Capsule Corp.",a red haired man stepped towards it holding a bag slung over his shoulder latched to a hook on the side of his white and blue t-shirt,a notepad held in place on his black jeans by a plastic spiraling mould.He smiled succesfully and began to head toward the front doors.

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Lol I have to say that I loved it!

It was quirky and nice, and terrific wording with Goguto. Brilliant work DL21. You're a fantastic writer.
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:D thanks!
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so far so good, i enjoyed reading it!
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New chapter name system coming next chapter!(Now.....)
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Trunks was sat in his office,he scribbled on a bright lavender peice of paper and folded it,it came out looking like a crane,he opened his window and tossed it out,it flew away in the winds,it landed outside at the feet of the red haired man as he was walking toward the capsule corp. building,the paper unfolded.

Chapter 2:A new face! Trunks' astonishment.

Trunks was still grinning at the thought.He had finally developed a way to discover and power up saiyan cells in humans!
Goguto,Haine,and Chromy stood around him also smiling.Although Chromy,being a robot,didnt really look like he was smiling,he was,quite visably,as you could see his teeth,his fleshy coat of skin over his robotic frame had been stretched to ridiculous length's,making him look like something from a cartoon.

Upstairs the red haired man stepped into the building and walked up to a curved and polished wooden desk,he spoke to the blonde secretary.
"Uhhh hi,Im Trey? Im here to see the CEO,Trunks?"He said smiling.
"Do You have an appointment?" She asked.The man nodded.
"full Name please?"She said,looking through some papers.
"Trey morkai? is that in there?"
"Morkai? is that an alien name? you look like a normal human to me."Replied the secretary.
"No,no,Im deffinatly human."
The secretary tucked away some more papers and took a form from Trey,it had his details written down.
"Ah,Your the new scientist?"She said satisfied,Trey just nodded.
The secretary pointed to a metal door and gave Trey a keycard,he walked over to the door and slid the card through,it bleeped and glowed red.
"Huh?",He tried again.Red.
"Stupid card an-Oh,I had it the wrong way round."He spun it and slid it again,green.
He looked at the now open door smugly.
"Ha!"He said,walking down into the lab.

On the way down he picked up a white labcoat and put it on,the proceeded further.
He stepped into the wide room,Vegeta was still dancing and the other 4 were all smiling still,Haine noticed Trey and tugged Trunks' jacket,making him turn around and look at the man who had disturbed his happy 15 minutes of sitting there smiling,Haine was rather relieved,in truth,that he didnt have to smile any more.
After that everyone looked at Trey,even Vegeta,who was STILL dancing,and gasping for air.
Trunks got up and walked over to Trey,he lookd at him head to toe and inspected him,wlaking around him in a circle,then he stuck his arm toward Trey.
"Trunks,nice to meet you!"Said Trunks smiling again.
Trey took his hand and shook it."Trey Morkai,its an honour."
They both took slight bows toward eachother and Trunks walked back toward the group,who didnt look quite as pleased.Trey followed.
"Okay guys,I'd like You to meet Trey morkai,he's a new scientist here."Said Trunks
Everyone else suddenly changed from blank looks to smiles and all waved quickly to him,before getting back to their respective work.
Trunks was sat with Trey,who had taken a seat,Goguto was stood there too.
"We still need someone to test this on,and I would feel sorry for whoever did,it would hurt ALOT."aid Trunks,"But who would do it?"He said scanning the room.
Trey dove into his thoughts,he didnt know what it was,but for the name of science would he take such a painstaking risk?
Trey was decided,and tapped Trunks' shoulder.
"I'll do it."He said.
Everyone in the room stopped and looked at him.
"Heeee's insane."Said Haine turning back to working with Chromy,who pulled of a rather human-like laugh.
Trunks just stared in awe at this red haired man who just 5 minutes prior had joined the team,and was already taking risks!"Are You sure?"

*10 minutes later*

Trey was strapped to 2 large metal poles in the same cube Vegeta had been in,in the background Vegeta crept off with a sack of hash.
"You ready?"Said Goguto,putting his hand on a lever.Trey nodded and clenched his fists and gritted his teeth,Goguto hit the lever forward and Trey was charged with electricity and loads of gas,He didnt know what it was but it hurt badly,his teeth couldnt hold any longer.
"RRAAAAAAAGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHHHRR!!!!!"He screamed in agony,he clenched his fists so tight his nails were cutting open his palms.
That small 5 minutes felt like years of suffering to Trey,he screamed repeatedly and even began to cry it hurt so much,he was with in inch of his life when it all stopped.And Trey passed out.
Goguto beckoned some men to get him out of the cube and into a medical room in the lab.Before shoving Trunks' head over the scope,he just stared.
"We did it!"He yelled,Trey's saiyan cells had been located,and powered up,none of them knew what it would do,but they knew they had done it.

Chapter end.

TrunksSSJ-Trunks.
Hainexxtrunks-Haine.
SSJ4chromy-Chromy.
NarutoGogeta-Goguto.
Dragonlord21-Trey.

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That was great. Though I would have loved it if it was a bit longer. Nonetheless another good fanfic DL21.
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Again, a really good chapter. So you're Trey, huh?

I loved it! Keep up the good work.
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"We know," she said. "We've seen the future. We know you're going to kill the world..."

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Had to cut it a few lines short because I hit an end before i wanted to,but Im keeping to a routine of chapter being roughly the same length.
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Well I guess its a good thing too. You did leave it room for a Chapter 3. There is a chapter 3 isn't there?
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It's really good. Kind of like the weekly newspaper clippings, right? All the same length, funny, quirky and interesting.
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(Sorry for late reply to NG,had to go out for a bit.)
Thanks dude.

Also Yeah,I suppose thats right,and Trunks,theres 8 chapters.
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A young woman walked past and noticed the paper,picked it up and tutted,folded it up in a plane shape and let it fly.
It flew great deals of length before finally catching on a tree branch,making the writing clear.

Chapter 3:A new side to the coin.

4,4 days had passed since their experiment,every day they took a new sample handed to them by the doctor watching over Trey.
Every sample showed more and more saiyan cells,and the human cells were still there,but exerting less ki than before.Nearly vanishing.
Everyone was still proud of there success,but only Goguto and Chromy seemed too worried,perhaps because Goguto knew exactly what was happening and Chromy could identify it just by scanning Goguto.
Goguto had several times been tempted to tell Trunks they should reverse the process,truth is he never could stand against Trunks,no matter how hard he tried he couldnt bring himself to.
Chromy in truth HAD said something,everyone gave him a weird look,aside from Goguto,and went back to life.

On the 5th day of Trey being out cold a huge bang! Erupted from the medical room and both the doctors ran for there lives behind Trunks,and the others.
Trunks,being the most powerful in that room,stepped into it to see what was happening,as he got closer screams of agony became more and more apparent.
Trunks,holding his ears in protection from the high volume screeches roared from behind that curtain,made it to the wall,took a deep breath,he could sense the ki coming from inside,it was not incredible strong,but it was considerable in quality,it was amazing,it was escalating,too.
Trunks took a deep breath and went in,there was Trey,screaming and engulfed in a very large purple-ish red aura.
Trunks held his ears even tighter now,the screams escalated,in the screams he could swear he heard Trey shout
"I WANT A GODDAMN KINGS FEAST!" Which made Trunks chuckle slightly.
It made sense,if his saiyan cells had amplified he guessed his matabamlism would take a change and he would be alot hungrier.

It took a few hours before everything was back to normal,amazingly Trey was infact camatose through the entire episode.Which shocked even Trunks.But Trey was awake now,and amazingly he had put away what he asked,a king sized feast,in just 6 minutes.
Goguto and Chromy both seemed very much aware things would likely get worse,everyone else just acted like everything was okay now.

The entire team,aside from Trunks,who was in his paper-crane littered office,were playing basketball on the blacktop outside.
Goguto was about to take a shot when he felt a tremendous wind force dash by.He looked around expecting Trey to have done something,it was just the wind though,because Trey was walking slowly toward them all.
"Hey Trey!" Shouted Haine,waving,Trey raised an eyebrow at him,seemingly confused,and stopped just next to them.
"Hey...."He said,a nearly disturbingly opposite voice of what was around the day he arrived.Everyone gave him a slightly shocked look.
"Uuhhhh, hey Trey."Said Goguto."Hey,You take a shot."Goguto tossed Trey the ball.
Trey looked it over and looked at the net,pulled his right hand all the way back and threw the ball at amazing speeds at the targetted net,it bounced off the board and hit the pole on the other,and flew around at incredible speeds,nearly unable to be seen,the ball took a bit of a sidetrack in one and smashed into Trey's face,it just hit it and bunced off,Trey looked slightly amused at it,and hadent even flinched.
Everyone gave him a surprised look,again,he liked it,he could sense fear,and nearly felt ashamed,because he liked it.He smirked slightly at the thought and waved to them,before turning and walking back into the CC building.

Trunks had noticed his saiyan attributes taking over his human cells,he was slightly worried about Trey now,this could turn out bad,so Trunks decided to train him to keep control and not go nuts,like a saiyan would,after all,Trunks already had one Vegeta to deal with,he didnt want another.
Trunks and Trey were stood in the middle of the ROSAT,Trunks rarely let people in here,but he guessed it was a neccesity.
"Alright.....Im gunna teach You how to use your ki to fly and power up your basic melee first"Said Trunks,seemingly expecting Trey to look at him weird.
Trey didnt,however,he just smirked and cocked his head backward.
"Like this?"He said,rocketing up into the air and flying around Trunks incredibly fast.Trunks just stared,and slowly muttered "How did yo-"
"I've been able to do it since i was awakened,i can imagine You already know what this is."Mocked Trey,charging a red energy ball in the tips of both his middle and index figer,it flew around like crazy before ramming into Trunks and causing an explosion.
Trunks pulled himself up and looked at Trey amazed.
"This should make things a bit easier......"

Wow......

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Greetings. I will be your waifu this season.

I love the addition of Vegeta being in it for the drugs
Who would have thought! :o_O: can just picture him in the corner with a spliff now lmao!
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This is getting dramatic. Can't wait for chapter 4.

Good work.
The blonde girl with the black lips turned to Valkyrie.
"We know," she said. "We've seen the future. We know you're going to kill the world..."

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